for The Superhero Poem5/15/2014 c1 
73mary.okeeffe.16
I love the poem. Do you want to read my stories. Try "The Temptations."
73mary.okeeffe.16I love the poem. Do you want to read my stories. Try "The Temptations."
2/18/2006 c1 2Let's Pretend
Cute. I love the ending stanza. Simple, but it has a nice flow.. Good job. =) Keep writing.
2Let's PretendCute. I love the ending stanza. Simple, but it has a nice flow.. Good job. =) Keep writing.
5/18/2005 c1 10gone since winter
mm.. i like. simple, the rhyming isn't forced and it flows nicely. keep writing.
10gone since wintermm.. i like. simple, the rhyming isn't forced and it flows nicely. keep writing.