
7/12/2005 c1
1A. Tieman
That was sweet. Maybe because I am in band, but they was really, really good. Liked the simile at the end. Well done.
Thanks for reviewing Blood Bath.I hate to tell you, but that is all there is. The vampire died because of the silver arrow to the heart. So yeah, end of story. Sorry.
Thanks for reviewing again.
Alyssa Tieman

That was sweet. Maybe because I am in band, but they was really, really good. Liked the simile at the end. Well done.
Thanks for reviewing Blood Bath.I hate to tell you, but that is all there is. The vampire died because of the silver arrow to the heart. So yeah, end of story. Sorry.
Thanks for reviewing again.
Alyssa Tieman
5/19/2005 c1
17Kinna
Short and to the point. I imagined being in a band room all full of noise. The simile at the end was good too.

Short and to the point. I imagined being in a band room all full of noise. The simile at the end was good too.
5/19/2005 c1
80citrus scented
i like it, quite a humorous end the comparison to cake! "music notes flying through the air" i like the image.

i like it, quite a humorous end the comparison to cake! "music notes flying through the air" i like the image.