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for Sending You My Guardian Angel

12/29/2006 c1 18Knightmare Elite
This was really good, and is speaks directly the reader about something most people can relate to. We all on some level have guardian angels watching over us, and there does comes that time for some when they are able to face the world in full acceptance and assurance. Great job.
6/19/2006 c1 1Soul Tea
Aw, that was a really sweet poem.Very protective and deep.
1/11/2006 c1 26cdr1687
good, but watch the grammar and etc. Also maybe you might want to format it differently with spacing or something, its not neccesary of course, but keep up the good work.
1/7/2006 c1 4riskkeybusiness
Beautiful! I love this poem so much! i love the line "all i know is i dont wanna see you cry" Thats really what matters.
1/7/2006 c1 18Gemema
Wow! I really loved this poem!

"i found the suni found the lighti escaped the darkand fled the night"

My fav piece! But I do have one small crit - "... I don't wanna see you cry." I think it would sound better if it read "... I don't want to see you cry." It's the only piece of slang/bad english in the whole piece, and it's a bit jaring compared to the rest.

But anyway, all in all, this is an awesome poem! Well done!
5/19/2005 c1 15liz anya
Very sweet.
5/19/2005 c1 Katterpiller
is that a chain letter? o well it was good~kath
5/19/2005 c1 91fake-smiles-n-masks
aw! thats so sweet. great job! i think my guardian angel went on vacation.=) smilingface
5/19/2005 c1 31withprettysmiles
aww that's so sweet! I love it.
5/19/2005 c1 4RurouniMarion
THAT WAS ADORABLE! It almost made me cry O.o I really like this! *huggles*

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