for When I Get There6/2/2005 c9 Stormy Daye
Blake's dead? Wow, didn't see that coming, I thought he would be on the run from the cops and get Morgan and Brent to hide him. The chapters are too short but I forgive you since you update so fast.
Blake's dead? Wow, didn't see that coming, I thought he would be on the run from the cops and get Morgan and Brent to hide him. The chapters are too short but I forgive you since you update so fast.
5/31/2005 c8 Stormy Daye
Oh no, Blake's in big trouble now. This keeps getting better. It reminds me a little of one of my favourite books, "Requiem for a Dream" by Hubert Selby Jr. Anyway keep writing, you update fast!
Oh no, Blake's in big trouble now. This keeps getting better. It reminds me a little of one of my favourite books, "Requiem for a Dream" by Hubert Selby Jr. Anyway keep writing, you update fast!
5/30/2005 c7 Stormy Daye
I actually like the way you switch point of views so quickly. It's like if Brent saw Blake on the street, when they walked past each other the point of view would switch. It's interesting, it makes it so certain parts don't drag on just so you can finish that section. Update soon!
I actually like the way you switch point of views so quickly. It's like if Brent saw Blake on the street, when they walked past each other the point of view would switch. It's interesting, it makes it so certain parts don't drag on just so you can finish that section. Update soon!
5/27/2005 c6 Stormy Daye
Everything they do is so normal to them. Getting raped is like nothing to her. It was like it never really happened. Anyway, the dialogue is very realistic. I'm getting into this story, update soon!
Everything they do is so normal to them. Getting raped is like nothing to her. It was like it never really happened. Anyway, the dialogue is very realistic. I'm getting into this story, update soon!
5/27/2005 c3 Stormy Daye
That chapter was really short. But of course it was still good. I really like this story so far!
That chapter was really short. But of course it was still good. I really like this story so far!
5/27/2005 c2 Stormy Daye
It's a little confusing how you go back and forth between Morgan and Brent but I like it.
It's a little confusing how you go back and forth between Morgan and Brent but I like it.
5/19/2005 c1 
21SunMoonAndSpoon
This was interesting, it'd be nice to know what's going on in Morgan's head...go a bit more in depth in the next chapter if you can...and maybe check your spelling. Other then that this is pretty good, hilarious because the names are ridiculous. Good job. ^_^
21SunMoonAndSpoonThis was interesting, it'd be nice to know what's going on in Morgan's head...go a bit more in depth in the next chapter if you can...and maybe check your spelling. Other then that this is pretty good, hilarious because the names are ridiculous. Good job. ^_^