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9/27/2005 c1 Sweetdarts
That's it? Oh come on. I'm being critical;just like you wanted so don't complain. I do like the body of the paragraphs though update this soon.
6/30/2005 c1 storm101
I can't figure out how to e-mail back, so I'll stick with this for now.

First inspirational line? Ah, who are we to argue with the muses?

does she get a puppy?
6/30/2005 c1 Storm101
I had a really long email written to you about the review you left, but the computer deleted it. This was the first story I saw, so this is my means of getting in touch with you.

Thank you so much for the constructive critisism. So many people just say they liked it and nothing else. not only did you say what you liked about it, you also said what you didn't like, and told me how to fix it.

What I was trying to do with the last bit was make it dramatic. I guess it didn't work out too well... I tried!

By the way, this story sounds pretty interesting. I do want to know, why does thinking of how she had always wanting a puppy trigger Jenni going into this other world? just curious.

Thanks for being my first reviewer! Storm101
6/4/2005 c1 18Starblossom
Sounds interesting! (And no, I don't mind criticism, I welcome it. How else can you improve? :D) Nice work.
5/20/2005 c1 Goblin52
Sounds interesting.
5/19/2005 c1 3Sirynta
Oh! It seems like it's going to be awesome! I cannot wait to read more!

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