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8/24/2005 c1 Charity F
nightinagales are so pwetty!
8/21/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Very nice. I like the imagery in this.
8/18/2005 c1 PunkLycan
ou pretty nightengale. you're really good at this ^^
8/4/2005 c1 14zuvalupa
Wow! I can see it all clearly in my mind. Wonderful description.
8/4/2005 c1 26ThatGirlInBlack
Wow this created a vivid picture in my mind...powerful once again...
6/30/2005 c1 12starflames
wow! such good imagrey, it leaves a beautiful picture in my head!
6/23/2005 c1 127Eirien
Lovely imagery, creates a lot of atmosphere in so few words. Well done.
6/5/2005 c1 26pneumothorax
I liked how the last line was simple in comparison to the others.
5/28/2005 c1 1Chase William
Sweet. Powerful imagery, too.
5/22/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
lovely imagery! just beautiful!
5/21/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
beautiful. the middle line is purely poetic and the haiku is written with a moer poetic then a haiku like feel. beautiful work.

!~* noelle *~!
5/21/2005 c1 4ShinkeiRyu
Chu!'tis so good!
5/21/2005 c1 account not in use
The imagery is amazing, appears vefore your eyes, keeps you there. Thanks for your review, and keep up the good work!
5/20/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
Simply magnificent. "Drenches the velvet-clad dusk" is poetry itself.
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