
5/21/2005 c1
84peaceman4ever
i love greeky mythology..i wrote a poem on it once..lol...Mna, this story is SO AWESOME!

i love greeky mythology..i wrote a poem on it once..lol...Mna, this story is SO AWESOME!
5/20/2005 c1 OldJoe
Really great. I could find few errors, and found myself chuckling at all your puns. Nothing is overdone, and the humor makes it's point and is sure not to stay long. They story is interesting, and you used a lot of great originality. Good job.
Really great. I could find few errors, and found myself chuckling at all your puns. Nothing is overdone, and the humor makes it's point and is sure not to stay long. They story is interesting, and you used a lot of great originality. Good job.