11/26/2005 c2 6Broken Telephone
Cute story! Awesome job! Thanks for the awesome review! P.S. I'm LDS, too. :)
Have an awesome day!
Cute story! Awesome job! Thanks for the awesome review! P.S. I'm LDS, too. :)
Have an awesome day!
6/23/2005 c1 8Rambling Thestral
Haha, crazy Mormon people getting up and married and saccharinely romantic...Heh. Just kidding. It's good! Looks like there could be a lot of potential for character development and...mm...stuff like that. I'm curious to see what else there could be!
Haha, crazy Mormon people getting up and married and saccharinely romantic...Heh. Just kidding. It's good! Looks like there could be a lot of potential for character development and...mm...stuff like that. I'm curious to see what else there could be!
6/17/2005 c1 3Heart of sunshine
very good story, it has a lot of potential! I can't wait to hear more!Amandaps. thanks for the review! I like ur user name, lol, very bold!
very good story, it has a lot of potential! I can't wait to hear more!Amandaps. thanks for the review! I like ur user name, lol, very bold!
6/15/2005 c1 me
Awesome!
Awesome!
6/15/2005 c1 Moroni's Daughter
I like this a lot! You've got me hooked. There's not much description yet, but you got right to the point, and there is so much plot potential. I can't wait to read more!
I like this a lot! You've got me hooked. There's not much description yet, but you got right to the point, and there is so much plot potential. I can't wait to read more!