for Of Scarlet Dewdrops9/17/2006 c2 
7Noihseret
o. 'her'? this is getting good. I like how you arranged this story to be more of Gabriel looking back on things. the overall mood of the story makes me want to so go read the vampire chronicles again... lol
you really do have a wonderful talent for words. they flow together so nicely. most people cannot pull of the dark, mysterious style of writing as well as you have.
I am looking forward to chapter three!
7Noihsereto. 'her'? this is getting good. I like how you arranged this story to be more of Gabriel looking back on things. the overall mood of the story makes me want to so go read the vampire chronicles again... lol
you really do have a wonderful talent for words. they flow together so nicely. most people cannot pull of the dark, mysterious style of writing as well as you have.
I am looking forward to chapter three!
9/17/2006 c1 Noihseret
this is really well writen! I can tell you are an Anne Rice fan. Gabriel reminds me of Lestat. or at least how this story starts off, it reminds me of Lestat's ^^
thank you for your reviews as well. I just finnished Sleet and Hale so you don't have to worry about 'catching up' lol
to the next chapter! away!
this is really well writen! I can tell you are an Anne Rice fan. Gabriel reminds me of Lestat. or at least how this story starts off, it reminds me of Lestat's ^^
thank you for your reviews as well. I just finnished Sleet and Hale so you don't have to worry about 'catching up' lol
to the next chapter! away!
1/16/2006 c2 32Veronika
Right on! Way to kill me with a cliffhanger...But right on! You rock so hard I could headbang to it. I love the attention to detail. It's like EVERY pinpoint was taken into consideration when sculpting the protagonist's perspective. You put a lot of hard work into this, and it shows. I'll slap you onto my favorites list and hope you update soon!
32VeronikaRight on! Way to kill me with a cliffhanger...But right on! You rock so hard I could headbang to it. I love the attention to detail. It's like EVERY pinpoint was taken into consideration when sculpting the protagonist's perspective. You put a lot of hard work into this, and it shows. I'll slap you onto my favorites list and hope you update soon!
8/16/2005 c2 2Orestes
Ooh, I like!
Not usually a fan of vampire works, simply because it's hard to find much thats original or interesting but you're on to something good here. Your descriptive prose is fantastic, and as mentioned above I love the way you're handling Gabriel's transition from the old to the present. Very cool.
A few grammatical/layout errors here and there, but they're pretty few and far between. That's pretty much about the only criticism I can give...hope to see more soon.
2OrestesOoh, I like!
Not usually a fan of vampire works, simply because it's hard to find much thats original or interesting but you're on to something good here. Your descriptive prose is fantastic, and as mentioned above I love the way you're handling Gabriel's transition from the old to the present. Very cool.
A few grammatical/layout errors here and there, but they're pretty few and far between. That's pretty much about the only criticism I can give...hope to see more soon.
8/5/2005 c2 343324
;_; I love the way you write, I SERIOUSLY do~
Every minute is full of descriptive emotion :D
I RARELY ever read vampire stories but I'm glad to have read yours.
Gabriel is pretty odd... strange yet cool and mystifying at the same time. Mm... I like his character. :D
Please continue!
;_; I love the way you write, I SERIOUSLY do~
Every minute is full of descriptive emotion :D
I RARELY ever read vampire stories but I'm glad to have read yours.
Gabriel is pretty odd... strange yet cool and mystifying at the same time. Mm... I like his character. :D
Please continue!
7/31/2005 c2 Arkash
A very interesting Vampire, Gabriel is. Nice chapter, with good descriptions. And now he meets cerulean eyes, good ending.
*_*
Btw, you've just read the 'fillers', that's what I call my short stories. All my novels have beautiful men in them.
A very interesting Vampire, Gabriel is. Nice chapter, with good descriptions. And now he meets cerulean eyes, good ending.
*_*
Btw, you've just read the 'fillers', that's what I call my short stories. All my novels have beautiful men in them.
7/31/2005 c1 Arkash
Very nice beginning. I like the way Gabriel is bemoaning the past. It also shows that he appreciates beauty and class.
I like this passage, but: "A glorious revenue into the past, I must say." Didn't you mean, A glorious avenue into the past, I must say. And you left out the comma.
Good Job! *_*
Very nice beginning. I like the way Gabriel is bemoaning the past. It also shows that he appreciates beauty and class.
I like this passage, but: "A glorious revenue into the past, I must say." Didn't you mean, A glorious avenue into the past, I must say. And you left out the comma.
Good Job! *_*
7/30/2005 c1 20Nivek Relleom
very interesting. you have a talent for something i may never have- write stories. i haven't really shown anything but poetry on here, but i plan on putting up a short story of mine soon.. i long for the next chapter, this should be quite thrilling. thanks for the flood of reviews, by the way.
20Nivek Relleomvery interesting. you have a talent for something i may never have- write stories. i haven't really shown anything but poetry on here, but i plan on putting up a short story of mine soon.. i long for the next chapter, this should be quite thrilling. thanks for the flood of reviews, by the way.
6/24/2005 c1 343324
"Oh~" was the first thing I said when I read the first sentence.
This chapter was really well-written! Full of detail-the writing made the area around me feel cold and dark :3 I love it to bits.
I applaud you for a great chapter and hope to see more! ^-^
"Oh~" was the first thing I said when I read the first sentence.
This chapter was really well-written! Full of detail-the writing made the area around me feel cold and dark :3 I love it to bits.
I applaud you for a great chapter and hope to see more! ^-^
6/23/2005 c1 14reality-forsaken
It's okayI guessbut to tell teh truth I never really like vampires, but great description.FANTASTIC job ur doing!Keep it up!
14reality-forsakenIt's okayI guessbut to tell teh truth I never really like vampires, but great description.FANTASTIC job ur doing!Keep it up!
6/23/2005 c1 14aaidenkae
you have a good idea. this is the first vampire story that ive bothered to read. books are comforting arent they? anyway, your writing was pretty good. i wont complain. better than mine. *haha* by the way, i have a similar policy- you review me i review you. unless the stuff is trashy. i sont want to read crap. but keep writing. i look foreward to seeing where this goes.-aaidenkae
14aaidenkaeyou have a good idea. this is the first vampire story that ive bothered to read. books are comforting arent they? anyway, your writing was pretty good. i wont complain. better than mine. *haha* by the way, i have a similar policy- you review me i review you. unless the stuff is trashy. i sont want to read crap. but keep writing. i look foreward to seeing where this goes.-aaidenkae
5/26/2005 c1 lilred07
wow i really really liked the beginning chapter. i can't wait to see what you will do for your next chapter
wow i really really liked the beginning chapter. i can't wait to see what you will do for your next chapter