for These feelings locked inside of me12/21/2006 c1 
16rip17
. gah! i'm in love with it! omg sorry i haven't read any of yer stuff and i said i was gonna! well...after a lifetime...here i am reading and reviewing!
16rip17. gah! i'm in love with it! omg sorry i haven't read any of yer stuff and i said i was gonna! well...after a lifetime...here i am reading and reviewing!
5/21/2005 c1 sylvia's syndrome
I really like this! The first stanza immediately brought to mind Eleanor Rigby by the Beatles, which has a few lines that go “Eleanor Rigby, wearing the face that she keeps in a jar by the door. Who is it for?” They fit, don’t you think? Anyway, the rhyming in this flows nicely and the rhythm keeps tempo all the way to the end. Congratulation on a job well done and keep up the great work!
I really like this! The first stanza immediately brought to mind Eleanor Rigby by the Beatles, which has a few lines that go “Eleanor Rigby, wearing the face that she keeps in a jar by the door. Who is it for?” They fit, don’t you think? Anyway, the rhyming in this flows nicely and the rhythm keeps tempo all the way to the end. Congratulation on a job well done and keep up the great work!