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12/10/2010 c1 2book.addict.for.life
This poem is great. You portrayed your emotions amazingly! You are awesome!
4/8/2009 c1 17Unique1952
I really like the emotion that you put forth in this pioem. Nice work with this piece. I really enjoyed reading. Again, nice work.
3/14/2006 c1 4Viper Strik3
whoa! you are such a good poet! keep writing! (please review back ^^)
10/24/2005 c1 3Glassed Rose
That was a really nice poem! I really liked it, It flowed super well! Keep up the good writing! -Claps-
6/5/2005 c1 3amethyst64
your poem is simple yet very beautiful. i can relate to it. ;) keep it up!
5/21/2005 c1 40Moosher
Beautiful poem.. I loved it! Very deep. The emotions are nicely portrayed. I loved the way you started off and the way you have a subtle rhyming scheme.. Does that make sense? Imuh stop talking now.. heh. Keep it up! Write on! Much love, Meme
5/21/2005 c1 KiraLyrin
I like, especially the lines:

'That my love for youWas hurting me'
5/21/2005 c1 18chicastar5
at first i didnt wanna read it...but then i started to read it and i couldnt be pulled away from my screen! a LOT is going on in this poem,its really sad how everything is slowly ending with so much love...good work!

Kari~
5/21/2005 c1 21Choke on this
great rhyming - i can feel the angst in this poem.

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