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12/15/2005 c1 18Alexander Willing
Despite the brevity of Bloodshed, it was glorious! I have a story here called "The Monster Project" and another called "At the Edge of the Blade"-both stories relate to you haiku. If you're interested, check them out and review them.
8/24/2005 c1 Charity F
sweet indeed...this sounds morbid..
8/18/2005 c1 PunkLycan
so powerful. intense. full of wickedness. :)
8/15/2005 c1 breezy nostrils
That gave me an eerie feeling...nice work!
8/4/2005 c1 14zuvalupa
Excellent! :D
8/4/2005 c1 16Noir Fleurir
super creepy haiku but it was good all the same i liked it:)
8/4/2005 c1 12UndueReality
Muhahah couldnt have said it better. Great job.
8/4/2005 c1 26ThatGirlInBlack
Yes vengeance is so sweet...Great job everything you write seems to come out so powerful...
7/7/2005 c1 206Night Skye Tears
o "rose red blossoms" how magnificent!

hey thanks so much for reviewing a coupla my poems XD
7/2/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
it seems to tell a story in such few words. you're a lucky person to be able to do that. i never could. but hopefully someday i will. fantabulous job!

SP
6/23/2005 c1 AubriannaKnight
heh heh heh...evil laughter. if only i could write something that good. It gets straight to the point and is very powerful.
6/5/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Rather good, vivd. I can see blood rather clearly.
6/5/2005 c1 26pneumothorax
Second line is intruiging. It's interpretable and interesting. I like it.
6/5/2005 c1 crazy-lady141
Gorgeous haiku, I have to say I really like it. :) Thanks for the review!
6/1/2005 c1 23Gray Angel
very good but short, it left me wanting more, but that is the point is it not?
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