for Too Close to Call3/2/2008 c9 
4The Foolish Traveler
Ah ha! I knew it! I'm just ultra cool like that though! XP Please please please update!
4The Foolish TravelerAh ha! I knew it! I'm just ultra cool like that though! XP Please please please update!
3/2/2008 c8 The Foolish Traveler
I bet its James, that likes her better than Autumn...mmhmm... thats what they were fighting for at lunch! Isn't it? Yes yes I'm sure it is!
I bet its James, that likes her better than Autumn...mmhmm... thats what they were fighting for at lunch! Isn't it? Yes yes I'm sure it is!
3/2/2008 c5 The Foolish Traveler
She should've hit him back! So I wonder will this be a Faye/Damon fic or a Faye/Joey fic, or maybe a Joey/Faye/Damon fic? hm... so far I like it
She should've hit him back! So I wonder will this be a Faye/Damon fic or a Faye/Joey fic, or maybe a Joey/Faye/Damon fic? hm... so far I like it
3/2/2008 c3 The Foolish Traveler
Hmm... I wonder why he's being so nice... makes me wonder... I have to read more!
So far, nice story!
Hmm... I wonder why he's being so nice... makes me wonder... I have to read more!
So far, nice story!
6/24/2005 c8 Chinoll
Well girl ! No matter how busy you get waiting for an update is worth it Whew you know how to pack action into a chapter and I HAVE TO SAY AUTUMN IS A COW ! lol anyway well done very nice update :) Look forward to your next one :D
*~*CHINODOLL*~*
Well girl ! No matter how busy you get waiting for an update is worth it Whew you know how to pack action into a chapter and I HAVE TO SAY AUTUMN IS A COW ! lol anyway well done very nice update :) Look forward to your next one :D
*~*CHINODOLL*~*
6/21/2005 c2 3KNE
Hey thereyour writing is pretty goos so far. It flows nicely and is easy to comprehend. There aren't too many grammatical errors of the sort that catch my eyes too much. It's only the second chapter so I'm not expecting a lot to happen just yet, but hopefully the characters will become a bit more realistic. Other than that, the plot of the story sounds great and I can't wait to read on. faye seems like a total bitch, lol! Good job and keep up w/ the good work!
KNE
3KNEHey thereyour writing is pretty goos so far. It flows nicely and is easy to comprehend. There aren't too many grammatical errors of the sort that catch my eyes too much. It's only the second chapter so I'm not expecting a lot to happen just yet, but hopefully the characters will become a bit more realistic. Other than that, the plot of the story sounds great and I can't wait to read on. faye seems like a total bitch, lol! Good job and keep up w/ the good work!
KNE
6/15/2005 c8 lili
UPDATE!
UPDATE!
6/12/2005 c7 1PhoenixFire415
This is so totally cool! I wanna know what "foolish thing" Faye does! I wanna know what "foolish thing" Faye does! I wanna know! Ughh...hyper, I have got to lay off on the sugar. Anyway, I am totally into this story! I love it! The plot sounds extremely interesting. And as I implied before, I really want to know what happens next! Don't disapoint me by late updates! I know they are unavoidable, but still. Seriously, I am going to simply die if I don't get enough good stories to continue on reading. I am very very serious.
1PhoenixFire415This is so totally cool! I wanna know what "foolish thing" Faye does! I wanna know what "foolish thing" Faye does! I wanna know! Ughh...hyper, I have got to lay off on the sugar. Anyway, I am totally into this story! I love it! The plot sounds extremely interesting. And as I implied before, I really want to know what happens next! Don't disapoint me by late updates! I know they are unavoidable, but still. Seriously, I am going to simply die if I don't get enough good stories to continue on reading. I am very very serious.
6/12/2005 c7 4TaurusGirl7
hah! lets just leave it a cliffie shall we! well just so you know, if you decided to cut it off so abrubtly, you can update twice as fast ! :Pso uh... update asap!
4TaurusGirl7hah! lets just leave it a cliffie shall we! well just so you know, if you decided to cut it off so abrubtly, you can update twice as fast ! :Pso uh... update asap!