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1/6/2008 c8 Alaxe
I like the story, and wish you to continue.
9/27/2006 c8 13angel4evaxxxxx
Damn! I've been sitting at my uni computer reading this for hours and now there is no more to read! Update please soon and make me happy! This is so good!
5/30/2006 c8 Jordan
Beautiful work! I absolutely love the psychology in all of this, because I know many people on Earth feel they don't deserve the things they have because of things that have happened to them. Very well written =). I hope you write a new chapter soon.
3/20/2006 c8 20SAKoi
o new doctor. evilness resides within him
2/8/2006 c8 muah
good story! keep updating..or did u say u weren't gonna update anymore? well i hope u do! because its a really good storyy!
9/23/2005 c7 30Alley Rhodes
BEAUTIFUl AS ALWAY!THANKS FOR THE SHOUT OUT!
9/13/2005 c7 bl00mbaby26
hey oprah good job. poop on you for making me wait. ok im gonna try and give you advice cause thats what you said in the begining.I liked all the thoughts sarah had about life... but near the end of her "musings" i kinda felt bored. you need to move the plot along or remind the reader with interaction with the setting more often while she is thinking. um i guess im trying to say have her thoughts interupted more often? otherwise good words and all that jazz. about jazz...how was dance? lol c ya later ~mrs.bloom
9/10/2005 c7 1animagusblack15
Heyy, good chapter...and i feel hurt...since we're your real friends we dont count...jk jk...good work, its amazing...and try to survive skool..lylas
7/29/2005 c6 animagusblack15
Jenni...i know i just told you this like 2 secs ago...but...good story...and of course that hidden talenet...it really is hidden...jk...yea so great jobAnd I congratulate you on ur unlaziness..~Zoya (if u didnt figure that out already)
7/22/2005 c6 bl00mbaby26
hey Jenni! i was bored and decided to check this out. let me tell you. I was blown away! i mean, i knwe you were good, but WOW! how do find the time to write this good! Im jealous! You Rock! Keep it Up! BBFL!
7/6/2005 c6 30Alley Rhodes
I am enjoying this story so much! (though I'm sure you could have figured that out your self right?)I can't wait till the next chapter. This George fellow seems interesting. Hope there is more about him!
6/21/2005 c5 Alley Rhodes
WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOWthat is the only word I can think of to describe this work of art! Keep it up!
6/17/2005 c5 PiNk DUck FrauD
In your author's note you said that your fingers had more control than your emotions? That's a good thing... it's a connection and can sometimes produce the best material you barely thought about. I'll let you know if I like it or not at the end, alright?

Again you have a problem with Sarah's thoughts dominating the story. It seems as though she's almost a one person cast... telling everything without support from the other characters. Sarah's thoughts and other characters speaking would be easier to tell the difference between if the were seperate paragraphs. I'm still reading and interesting chapter, still not enough information about the exact situation with Donna... and whose George? o.0
6/17/2005 c3 PiNk DUck FrauD
There was a good bit of information on Sarah's mother and Alicia, though the pair seem a little odd... I can see why Alicia would want distance between her and her sister. It's sad, though.

The box and the diaries contains a lot of good information especially the personfication of them as real things...things needed to be confronted.

The last few italiced lines are excellent and give a lot of information into her character without taking a long time to ramble. It's the thing from the summary but extended... I'm very curious about Sarah's "why question". I'll get to reading the remaining two chapters later.
6/17/2005 c1 PiNk DUck FrauD
Your summary drew my attention because I'm interested in the remorse a killer feels, but the formatting is a little hard to read... sometimes Sarah's thoughts are repetitive in nature and the Doc seems a little too cruel, lacking in understanding, but that's just my thoughts.

I'll continue reading and review every odd chapter: Expect a review on 3 and 5, when I finish them.
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