for A Northland Tale8/29/2005 c1 
11Wolfie Star26
Can't believe I didn't read this before. It's nice, I really like it. You always do a good job on what you write. Keep up the great, awesome work.
I updated deadly games and replaced the an with chapter four, so I don't think an update would show up in your review history.
11Wolfie Star26Can't believe I didn't read this before. It's nice, I really like it. You always do a good job on what you write. Keep up the great, awesome work.
I updated deadly games and replaced the an with chapter four, so I don't think an update would show up in your review history.
5/29/2005 c1 404358034958034
Whoa, nice storytelling. That Akan seemed like a real dirtball. Wow, have I been lazy lately.
Whoa, nice storytelling. That Akan seemed like a real dirtball. Wow, have I been lazy lately.
5/23/2005 c1 31Mya von Dor
that's great! he got his comeuppance, hurrah! It's well written, though there are a few bits in the beginning description that he wouldn't have said, like not looking at the play of the light on the trees...but anyway, good story!
31Mya von Dorthat's great! he got his comeuppance, hurrah! It's well written, though there are a few bits in the beginning description that he wouldn't have said, like not looking at the play of the light on the trees...but anyway, good story!