
5/23/2005 c1
87youzi
interesting piece...i liked 'temptations of drought
of sharpened trees,the fire is litburnt, from afar'...do keep writing =D

interesting piece...i liked 'temptations of drought
of sharpened trees,the fire is litburnt, from afar'...do keep writing =D
5/22/2005 c1 pokerfaCE
Wow. Its a rather cute poem! ^-^ Sounds very biblical and solemn though. I cant really understand the flow of the poem, but i still roughly get the gist of it: a persons emotions when he comes upon a waterfall? its a deep poem. :)
Wow. Its a rather cute poem! ^-^ Sounds very biblical and solemn though. I cant really understand the flow of the poem, but i still roughly get the gist of it: a persons emotions when he comes upon a waterfall? its a deep poem. :)