for Just Because3/14/2007 c1 Fantazolic
Really interesting poem. Stereotyping people or labeling them is really low just because they might- like you mentioned- get good grades, or like sports or even just because they're a girl. I particularly liked that 'Just because I'm a girl..' stanza.
Really well written and great idea!
Great work,
Fantazolic
Really interesting poem. Stereotyping people or labeling them is really low just because they might- like you mentioned- get good grades, or like sports or even just because they're a girl. I particularly liked that 'Just because I'm a girl..' stanza.
Really well written and great idea!
Great work,
Fantazolic
5/6/2006 c1 
11mtninejr87
What you say is so true. Everything you described affects me personally. Especially about being a teen. I'm in my last teenage year of 19 but I am still treated as if I'm a trouble-making teenager. Good job.
11mtninejr87What you say is so true. Everything you described affects me personally. Especially about being a teen. I'm in my last teenage year of 19 but I am still treated as if I'm a trouble-making teenager. Good job.
3/10/2006 c1 11Masavi
:) I love this.
...and I'm all those things you mentioned, too, so I'm TOTALLY for it.
11Masavi:) I love this.
...and I'm all those things you mentioned, too, so I'm TOTALLY for it.
2/28/2006 c1 1rrmehta364
Congrats for getting this published. Stereotypes can definately be annoying at times.
1rrmehta364Congrats for getting this published. Stereotypes can definately be annoying at times.
1/1/2006 c1 3dancerintheroom
Amazing! This world would be a much bett place if more people thought like you...
3dancerintheroomAmazing! This world would be a much bett place if more people thought like you...
12/30/2005 c1 2TirzahRuth
I love this poem and agree with it wholeheartedly. I like your thinking. Congrats on getting it published.
2TirzahRuthI love this poem and agree with it wholeheartedly. I like your thinking. Congrats on getting it published.
12/2/2005 c1 8miss whoever
I love this poem! Perfect - its no surprise that it would be published
keep on writing
8miss whoeverI love this poem! Perfect - its no surprise that it would be published
keep on writing
10/30/2005 c1 20Autumn Dance
That's really clever- I like the one about being a girl. This shouts flair and flourish. It's fantastic. Thank you for reviewing my Dandelion Tea Piece. It's meant to be psycotic, so thats why it's nothing to do with Tea! I shall check out some of your other work, so keep it up! Love Becki x
20Autumn DanceThat's really clever- I like the one about being a girl. This shouts flair and flourish. It's fantastic. Thank you for reviewing my Dandelion Tea Piece. It's meant to be psycotic, so thats why it's nothing to do with Tea! I shall check out some of your other work, so keep it up! Love Becki x
10/16/2005 c1 18Plinky
WOw, great poem, I totally agree. And I love the way you seem to be able to make it rhyme without it sounding forced. Really good! Thanks for the reviews and keep writing!
18PlinkyWOw, great poem, I totally agree. And I love the way you seem to be able to make it rhyme without it sounding forced. Really good! Thanks for the reviews and keep writing!
10/12/2005 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
*Very* well done. I really liked this. It has such a powerful message and flows really well. Great job! Ur story seems interesting and I will try to get around to it as soon as I have a spare moment. Great job!
13XxDragon Princess NikkixX*Very* well done. I really liked this. It has such a powerful message and flows really well. Great job! Ur story seems interesting and I will try to get around to it as soon as I have a spare moment. Great job!
9/30/2005 c1 9Eyetk
Apoligies for not returning your review earlier!
Nice work! It rings true on so many levels. However, your might want to be careful with your phrasing, there. Saying that people like to stereotype you can be considered stereotyping people in generally, you know!
On the whole-well done! Rhymes aren't forced...good use of italics...cheers on the excellent poem!
9EyetkApoligies for not returning your review earlier!
Nice work! It rings true on so many levels. However, your might want to be careful with your phrasing, there. Saying that people like to stereotype you can be considered stereotyping people in generally, you know!
On the whole-well done! Rhymes aren't forced...good use of italics...cheers on the excellent poem!
9/27/2005 c1 Gigi
Hey
I just came from your bio page and I saw this and am I llike hm" So I read it and am going "Impressive"
Yeah . Great constructive criticism isnt it? I like your poetry structure, I think it is very well thought out and I just bet this was a blurb for you. It sounds so very natural. Anyway... god luck.. I like you screenname.
Gigi
PS I dont have an account here yet. So srry.
Hey
I just came from your bio page and I saw this and am I llike hm" So I read it and am going "Impressive"
Yeah . Great constructive criticism isnt it? I like your poetry structure, I think it is very well thought out and I just bet this was a blurb for you. It sounds so very natural. Anyway... god luck.. I like you screenname.
Gigi
PS I dont have an account here yet. So srry.
9/23/2005 c1 13gabriellafaith
I really like this. It's so true!
Thanks for the review on The Arena, anyways. Chapter two is up if you cared to read any longer.
Great poem! Keep writing!
gabriellafaith
13gabriellafaithI really like this. It's so true!
Thanks for the review on The Arena, anyways. Chapter two is up if you cared to read any longer.
Great poem! Keep writing!
gabriellafaith