for Boyfriend5/23/2005 c1 
15Kella Trams
Oh. My. Goodness. That was wonderful. That's going on my favorites list. I loved it! It was so beautiful and really touched me. So many other girls and young women can relate to this, it's amazing. Very nice ending. When you ended it that way, it was almost like I expected to turn the page and see the beginning of a romance novel. It stands alone perfectly but I can also really see it being an awesome introduction to some sort of story about fate or something. Very good. The only thing I would suggest would be maybe more boys in the middle? I know at least one boy dates her casually when she's younger, but, unless you have something different in mind for the character, I would say at least implying that the girl went through other guys who at least gave her the butterflies would be a good idea, because that happens. Thankyou so much for sharing this. Beautiful beautiful beautiful.
15Kella TramsOh. My. Goodness. That was wonderful. That's going on my favorites list. I loved it! It was so beautiful and really touched me. So many other girls and young women can relate to this, it's amazing. Very nice ending. When you ended it that way, it was almost like I expected to turn the page and see the beginning of a romance novel. It stands alone perfectly but I can also really see it being an awesome introduction to some sort of story about fate or something. Very good. The only thing I would suggest would be maybe more boys in the middle? I know at least one boy dates her casually when she's younger, but, unless you have something different in mind for the character, I would say at least implying that the girl went through other guys who at least gave her the butterflies would be a good idea, because that happens. Thankyou so much for sharing this. Beautiful beautiful beautiful.