
3/12/2010 c1 The Lemon Critic
Sexy.
Sexy.
1/15/2010 c1 Bored in 8th Period
Nice! I like it. I just can't help but wonder if you did not put the main characters gender in it for the reason of the reader can think of it as their own gender.
Nice! I like it. I just can't help but wonder if you did not put the main characters gender in it for the reason of the reader can think of it as their own gender.
1/1/2007 c1 typer
can we plz cyber
all you stories are so good
keep up the good work
can we plz cyber
all you stories are so good
keep up the good work
8/12/2005 c1
4Knightmare Elite
What a nice little treat I've stumbled upon. I like the whole party scene, I don't know why but I always found office parties a little naughty. There's always something mischevious going on somewhere.
Nice scene between the characters. Keep up the nice work.

What a nice little treat I've stumbled upon. I like the whole party scene, I don't know why but I always found office parties a little naughty. There's always something mischevious going on somewhere.
Nice scene between the characters. Keep up the nice work.
7/5/2005 c1 Natpc911
Not to be a kill joy or anything but I think, I'm not sure, but I think Jemma walked out of the Bathroom without her shirt on. I would have enjoyed it had I been there, but I thought who ever is reading this would have a good excuse to go back and reread it for fun.
Not to be a kill joy or anything but I think, I'm not sure, but I think Jemma walked out of the Bathroom without her shirt on. I would have enjoyed it had I been there, but I thought who ever is reading this would have a good excuse to go back and reread it for fun.
5/29/2005 c1 HornyBiyotch
God. I wish I could be in one of these. lol. I just love this one the most. its so sexual. Sneekie, are you gay? Or bi? lol.
God. I wish I could be in one of these. lol. I just love this one the most. its so sexual. Sneekie, are you gay? Or bi? lol.
5/28/2005 c1 deli-lise
reading it again...hot,really hot
reading it again...hot,really hot
5/28/2005 c1 HornyBiyotch
Oh god! This is so friggin awesome! It makes me so horny! It makes me wanna cyber.
Oh god! This is so friggin awesome! It makes me so horny! It makes me wanna cyber.