
9/13/2006 c4
34C.A. Eigsti
you show, greatly, the good and bad of love in each metaphor beautifully.
you are amazing. keep it up.

you show, greatly, the good and bad of love in each metaphor beautifully.
you are amazing. keep it up.
6/8/2005 c3 MissChiaroscuro
sometimes i think that the negative part of love is stronger than the positive side by the way you write...
sometimes i think that the negative part of love is stronger than the positive side by the way you write...
5/25/2005 c4
8BadSweets
Hey! Very nice, I particularly like the lines from 'And it's rather...' to '...is still standing.' I really like that metaphor.

Hey! Very nice, I particularly like the lines from 'And it's rather...' to '...is still standing.' I really like that metaphor.
5/24/2005 c1 BadSweets
Oh! A simple poem, I like how you cut the lines. You could use more punctuation for effect... I loved the imagery you used. No real clichés in there!
This looks like a nice series.
Oh! A simple poem, I like how you cut the lines. You could use more punctuation for effect... I loved the imagery you used. No real clichés in there!
This looks like a nice series.
5/24/2005 c1
12Lisa Parry
An apt metaphor and although there were two extremes within the poem (i.e love being gentle then not) it worked well. :)

An apt metaphor and although there were two extremes within the poem (i.e love being gentle then not) it worked well. :)