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6/22/2005 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Interesting poem. I like.
6/19/2005 c1 Sweetdarts
So true. Tell the guys to look defeat right in the eyeballs. *-*
6/19/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Excellent this is splendid. The pacing is good, and your tone is fluid. Love that last line!
5/31/2005 c1 galliver
*applause* i love the idea/feeling involved :) :) :) :)

first five lines are AWESOME.

toward the end, you lose rhythm and rhyme scheme. :(

"It takes a brave man to fight, but a braver man to run" is nice...are you sure you want to use run? not "step back" or smtn? it's nice as it is tho, don't take me wrong..ly...
5/24/2005 c1 21TheGreatAmericanNovel
I can't decide weither i like it or not. I don't know. I give it one thumb up and one thumb down. keep writting.

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