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10/31/2005 c17 25Esquirella
Good GOD! What have you done to poor Mikey? You go and yell at me for teasing trouble between Ryan and Lee and here you go letting Mikey leave Brett like that? *Miffed beyond words*
10/31/2005 c17 osunale
Semi-dissapointing. The story is great as always but the writing seemed a little below the par I have set for you. The beginning was rather abrubt and...just not as fleshed out as your writing usually is. Really though, that still puts you above most.
10/31/2005 c17 ddz008
GREAT CHAPTER!I really liked it!But... it's really over? Even if they love each other... WHY?Is Brett mad? I hope to see the next chapter pretty soon, please!Keep writing, please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
10/31/2005 c17 4PassionObsession
Ek.
10/31/2005 c17 1The Inkslinger
*sob* I've been a horrible, no good, awful reviewer.. or non-reviewer, I suppose, but I'm still reading and I love you more than ever.

Every time I get an author alert I hope it's from this story. I love it so very much... I think it's my all time favorite ever. I mean, I thought I liked Damon and Brett together, but I adore Mike so much more... I can hardly believe you you managed to make me -glad- Damon was gone! Mike and Brett are awesome together, so, so awesome.

And so this chapter made me cry- really, I truly cried at the end, and I have so much pride and love for Mike now... God, I can't believe how wonderful this story is.

I'm sorry for being a no good, awful, horrible non-reviewer, but again, I am still reading and you are always my favorite author. I am completely smitten with your stories, and so please do update soon, otherwise I just might die.

Thank you!

-Love Inky
10/30/2005 c16 6Rinna
Hmm, I originally read this story before your others involving these characters. This story atnds on its own quite well, and I really liked it already. However, once I finally went back and read all the older stories, this story just takes on so much more meaning. I'm glad that both Mike and Brett seem to be moving on from their respective awful situations.

I also love that you and Esquirella are doing partial crossovers with your stories, it makes things quite interesting. In fact, reading Esquirella's Moving On was what finally inspired me to look at your older stories.

Anyway, I'll try to start doing individual chapter reviews from here on out, because I like doing so. I just wanted to comment in general on the story as a whole first.
10/29/2005 c16 8Sundown
Ahh...I just read the whole thing in two sittings...and sheepishly admitting in the one day. I am fascinated by this story...I particularly love the brooding character of Brett, and I like Dane and of course the protagonist, Mike. I also love all the aussie references you use...being aussie myself its refreshing to have a story with products, words and concepts that you know. Anyhoo, I apologise for this absolute novel of a review, but I think you are a talented writer, and I can't wait to see where this is heading. Thanks for the great read! xx
10/28/2005 c16 32eldrin
Now THIS is looking interesting. Can't wait to see where it goes.
10/27/2005 c16 25Esquirella
SO many places I could go with this! Good Lord, how am I going to decide? LOL! Don't worry though ... I will.
10/27/2005 c16 5Yoyo-chan
Oh, is Damon going to be in the next chapter? :DD *looks forward to it* I love it when Damon makes cameos ^^;
10/26/2005 c15 32eldrin
This chapter made me feel warm and fuzzy. Lovely.
10/26/2005 c15 25Esquirella
Dude! I can see insulting Damon (not that I love it. LOL! He is mine now, after all.) But you totally made my poor little Trent out to be some high-faluting rich boy who took Damon in and became his sugar daddy! *adopting an old American [circa Civil War] accent* Now this here's war, see? LOLOLOL! (just kidding! but I do have an idea now - and it's all your fault! I'll email you!)
10/26/2005 c15 4Taylor-Ame
Uh oh. I sense bad things. I spike Michael's hair in the shower too. Aw.
10/25/2005 c15 ddz008
GREAT CHAPTER!It was so sweet!Brett missed him! He had to use porn!And he finally told him he loved him! That was so nice even if it wasn't exactly romantic!Hope to see the next chapter pretty soon please!:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
10/22/2005 c14 acid-tears
very nice :)
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