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6/5/2005 c1 26pneumothorax
Rhyming seems a bit forced in parts but it's not bad. Quite removed almost.
5/25/2005 c1 84ckk
This is good but you have a grammer mistake in the 6th line, my should be mine I think, but keep up the good work.

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