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7/1/2005 c1 6Catie
This is very surreal (which would make sense, as it's depicting a dream). It's a bit confusing at times. Be careful about your grammar-bad grammar can make the most carefully crafted poems far less effective than they might have been had the grammar been correct.
6/19/2005 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
kind of creapy. which is probally why I think it's soo cool. Great job, very crazy. ^_^
5/29/2005 c1 121velvet silhouettes
I did actually write a song similar to my poem Bang Bang...it's called Beautiful Destruction.

I like your writing, very unique.
5/29/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
aw so sad. wow. powerful and story-like. sad ending with back part.
5/26/2005 c1 19polkadot ladybug
creepy 0_o
5/25/2005 c1 4Candy-yum-yum
wow, creepy emily. jk, i like it, tis thought provoking. my dearest cousin, you are quite awsome indeed. lol.- jess the mess
5/25/2005 c1 15Cyberknight
wow. you're all over the map on this. It's got a Edger Allen Poe type feel to it. It's kind of like "the raven".

Good job.
5/25/2005 c1 11CyanideKiss
Confused? Of course. Kind of sounds like something I would write. Maybe you should decypher your dreams?

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