for The Invisible Girl7/1/2005 c1 
6Catie
This is very surreal (which would make sense, as it's depicting a dream). It's a bit confusing at times. Be careful about your grammar-bad grammar can make the most carefully crafted poems far less effective than they might have been had the grammar been correct.
6CatieThis is very surreal (which would make sense, as it's depicting a dream). It's a bit confusing at times. Be careful about your grammar-bad grammar can make the most carefully crafted poems far less effective than they might have been had the grammar been correct.
6/19/2005 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
kind of creapy. which is probally why I think it's soo cool. Great job, very crazy. ^_^
54ByFireAndMoonlightkind of creapy. which is probally why I think it's soo cool. Great job, very crazy. ^_^
5/29/2005 c1 121velvet silhouettes
I did actually write a song similar to my poem Bang Bang...it's called Beautiful Destruction.
I like your writing, very unique.
121velvet silhouettesI did actually write a song similar to my poem Bang Bang...it's called Beautiful Destruction.
I like your writing, very unique.
5/29/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
aw so sad. wow. powerful and story-like. sad ending with back part.
3Cry Tears of Darknessaw so sad. wow. powerful and story-like. sad ending with back part.
5/25/2005 c1 4Candy-yum-yum
wow, creepy emily. jk, i like it, tis thought provoking. my dearest cousin, you are quite awsome indeed. lol.- jess the mess
4Candy-yum-yumwow, creepy emily. jk, i like it, tis thought provoking. my dearest cousin, you are quite awsome indeed. lol.- jess the mess
5/25/2005 c1 15Cyberknight
wow. you're all over the map on this. It's got a Edger Allen Poe type feel to it. It's kind of like "the raven".
Good job.
15Cyberknightwow. you're all over the map on this. It's got a Edger Allen Poe type feel to it. It's kind of like "the raven".
Good job.
5/25/2005 c1 11CyanideKiss
Confused? Of course. Kind of sounds like something I would write. Maybe you should decypher your dreams?
11CyanideKissConfused? Of course. Kind of sounds like something I would write. Maybe you should decypher your dreams?