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10The Diamond Deception
Oh! Cliffhanger! This was awesome! I can't wait for the next one! :O)
10The Diamond DeceptionOh! Cliffhanger! This was awesome! I can't wait for the next one! :O)
5/28/2005 c2 10The Diamond Deception
This chapter was very interesting! It caught my attention quickly and held it... I can't wait to see what happens next! *By the way, when I saw your note at the top of the page I started crying because that was so sweet of you!
10The Diamond DeceptionThis chapter was very interesting! It caught my attention quickly and held it... I can't wait to see what happens next! *By the way, when I saw your note at the top of the page I started crying because that was so sweet of you!
5/27/2005 c1 The Diamond Deception
Wow! All I can say right now is wow! I loved the imagery, it's like there was a movie playing in my mind, but more real, sort of like a play. It seemed I could have reached out and touched the characters and things. Keep up the good work!
Wow! All I can say right now is wow! I loved the imagery, it's like there was a movie playing in my mind, but more real, sort of like a play. It seemed I could have reached out and touched the characters and things. Keep up the good work!