for Something of Beauty11/17/2005 c1 
168SeaVoi
I like how you went to sleep, and wokeup in a new world! It was cool,and I like it. Thanks for the review.
168SeaVoiI like how you went to sleep, and wokeup in a new world! It was cool,and I like it. Thanks for the review.
6/18/2005 c1 13sunscraped
Interesting dream... I must say, I liked the end with the ever-morphing tear... but tears come from ducts and not lids, dear... simple mistake. Only slightly detracted from the beauty you convey with this piece. Very original... But it sounds a little generic with the dialogue... I guess we can't help that, practically everything is written in every standpoint. Beautiful job, please do continue to write these unique pieces.
13sunscrapedInteresting dream... I must say, I liked the end with the ever-morphing tear... but tears come from ducts and not lids, dear... simple mistake. Only slightly detracted from the beauty you convey with this piece. Very original... But it sounds a little generic with the dialogue... I guess we can't help that, practically everything is written in every standpoint. Beautiful job, please do continue to write these unique pieces.
5/25/2005 c1 83Nails For Your Crucifix
Wonderful descriptions and beauful imagry. Maybe it would be better as a poem since it is mostly description, and not plot of characters.
And it was confuscious, buddha and lao-tse. Good job though
83Nails For Your CrucifixWonderful descriptions and beauful imagry. Maybe it would be better as a poem since it is mostly description, and not plot of characters.
And it was confuscious, buddha and lao-tse. Good job though
5/25/2005 c1 24Miyabi-chan
Hey! That was really good. I love those stories that are so suspenseful like this! (is suspenseful a word?) Well anyway, I gotta go! Keep writing!
~Lone Metal
24Miyabi-chanHey! That was really good. I love those stories that are so suspenseful like this! (is suspenseful a word?) Well anyway, I gotta go! Keep writing!
~Lone Metal