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1/23/2014 c19 16atenea-in-the-sky
God... You broke my heart with this story. I seriously cried.
It was wonderfully written.
8/12/2013 c3 Preposterous
Steve's sick, isn't he? I have a bad feeling about this.
2/21/2013 c18 4R. Ficst
What a terrible situation.
2/1/2013 c19 avidmoonstar
Absolutely amazing! I loved that this story was not just about a specific romantic relationship, but about human relationships. I loved that it was an adult story with mature adult characters (one can only read so much teenage angsty slash, right?). Despite the fact this story made me tear-up more than I'd like to admit, it was such a good read. Thank you for writing this and posting it on FP.
11/6/2012 c1 Guest
Beautifully Written. Nice work.
9/18/2012 c19 KatieBobb
:) Thanks for posting.
9/17/2012 c2 KatieBobb
:) Love it
7/19/2012 c7 Lovelyhatred18
Well let me start off saying that this isn't a bad review. This is a great review. When I usually read a story I can tell it's amazingly well written when I get mad at the characters and Sammie has pissed me off so much! Lol I love this story and I must say I want Sammie to go with Tyler. I've always been intrigued by mystery and steve is the past but Tyler is the future. I enjoy reading every single word
1/8/2012 c18 H.s.s.Hunter
Is it really based on somebody? That's so mean... Just because they're gay... *sigh* dating an older person is complicated.
1/8/2012 c8 H.s.s.Hunter
NO! No, fuck you Steve! Sammie chose Tyler! But- but- ufitcitdjfsyrsig curUrsyaurTUSTUT TITOSUSIYHPITFOUGOUF KFPCLYDITTIDI RAGE!
12/18/2011 c2 1writer3098
again rushed and you need to use transition words and better vocab to make your writing seem more advanced

to many gay couples

and is terri a boy or girl you need to make this clear
12/18/2011 c1 writer3098
I think chapter was a bit rushed and that you could have extended it quite a bit
12/8/2011 c19 1Ben Tramsami
So I was going to favorite this, but then I realized I could not sit through reading this again. I cried though most of it. It was good though, really well written. So since I can't favorite it, I thought I'd leave a review for you. And like I said, it was really well written.

I wish you luck on your writing journey, dear author. :)
9/13/2011 c18 4checkerboardom
I read about Matt...that was just horrible. Poor guy but you know I wonder what the 14 yr old thought about it all...
8/20/2011 c19 Fumiki
This is sad, but oh my god I fking love it. Tragic, but that's life. Thank you for writing such incredible story :)
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