for Disenchanted1/23/2014 c19 
16atenea-in-the-sky
God... You broke my heart with this story. I seriously cried.
It was wonderfully written.
16atenea-in-the-skyGod... You broke my heart with this story. I seriously cried.
It was wonderfully written.
2/1/2013 c19 avidmoonstar
Absolutely amazing! I loved that this story was not just about a specific romantic relationship, but about human relationships. I loved that it was an adult story with mature adult characters (one can only read so much teenage angsty slash, right?). Despite the fact this story made me tear-up more than I'd like to admit, it was such a good read. Thank you for writing this and posting it on FP.
Absolutely amazing! I loved that this story was not just about a specific romantic relationship, but about human relationships. I loved that it was an adult story with mature adult characters (one can only read so much teenage angsty slash, right?). Despite the fact this story made me tear-up more than I'd like to admit, it was such a good read. Thank you for writing this and posting it on FP.
11/6/2012 c1 Guest
Beautifully Written. Nice work.
Beautifully Written. Nice work.
7/19/2012 c7 Lovelyhatred18
Well let me start off saying that this isn't a bad review. This is a great review. When I usually read a story I can tell it's amazingly well written when I get mad at the characters and Sammie has pissed me off so much! Lol I love this story and I must say I want Sammie to go with Tyler. I've always been intrigued by mystery and steve is the past but Tyler is the future. I enjoy reading every single word
Well let me start off saying that this isn't a bad review. This is a great review. When I usually read a story I can tell it's amazingly well written when I get mad at the characters and Sammie has pissed me off so much! Lol I love this story and I must say I want Sammie to go with Tyler. I've always been intrigued by mystery and steve is the past but Tyler is the future. I enjoy reading every single word
1/8/2012 c18 H.s.s.Hunter
Is it really based on somebody? That's so mean... Just because they're gay... *sigh* dating an older person is complicated.
Is it really based on somebody? That's so mean... Just because they're gay... *sigh* dating an older person is complicated.
1/8/2012 c8 H.s.s.Hunter
NO! No, fuck you Steve! Sammie chose Tyler! But- but- ufitcitdjfsyrsig curUrsyaurTUSTUT TITOSUSIYHPITFOUGOUF KFPCLYDITTIDI RAGE!
NO! No, fuck you Steve! Sammie chose Tyler! But- but- ufitcitdjfsyrsig curUrsyaurTUSTUT TITOSUSIYHPITFOUGOUF KFPCLYDITTIDI RAGE!
12/18/2011 c2 1writer3098
again rushed and you need to use transition words and better vocab to make your writing seem more advanced
to many gay couples
and is terri a boy or girl you need to make this clear
1writer3098again rushed and you need to use transition words and better vocab to make your writing seem more advanced
to many gay couples
and is terri a boy or girl you need to make this clear
12/18/2011 c1 writer3098
I think chapter was a bit rushed and that you could have extended it quite a bit
I think chapter was a bit rushed and that you could have extended it quite a bit
12/8/2011 c19 1Ben Tramsami
So I was going to favorite this, but then I realized I could not sit through reading this again. I cried though most of it. It was good though, really well written. So since I can't favorite it, I thought I'd leave a review for you. And like I said, it was really well written.
I wish you luck on your writing journey, dear author. :)
1Ben TramsamiSo I was going to favorite this, but then I realized I could not sit through reading this again. I cried though most of it. It was good though, really well written. So since I can't favorite it, I thought I'd leave a review for you. And like I said, it was really well written.
I wish you luck on your writing journey, dear author. :)
9/13/2011 c18 4checkerboardom
I read about Matt...that was just horrible. Poor guy but you know I wonder what the 14 yr old thought about it all...
4checkerboardomI read about Matt...that was just horrible. Poor guy but you know I wonder what the 14 yr old thought about it all...
8/20/2011 c19 Fumiki
This is sad, but oh my god I fking love it. Tragic, but that's life. Thank you for writing such incredible story :)
This is sad, but oh my god I fking love it. Tragic, but that's life. Thank you for writing such incredible story :)