for Conversation with a Mourning Dove6/3/2005 c1 Bronwen Ackeley
This poem is my favorite out of the three. Very beautiful! I can't find words enough to express this! I LOVED the comparison of bleeding to rain! And you picked a GREAT last line! Absolutely breathtaking!
This poem is my favorite out of the three. Very beautiful! I can't find words enough to express this! I LOVED the comparison of bleeding to rain! And you picked a GREAT last line! Absolutely breathtaking!
5/27/2005 c1 
38GoAskAlice
once again im absolutely in awe from ur work...it's just so chilling and tragically beautiful...i'm just speechless
38GoAskAliceonce again im absolutely in awe from ur work...it's just so chilling and tragically beautiful...i'm just speechless
5/26/2005 c1 34Bittersweetwriting
whoa, chilling! :) great poem it gave me shivers! excellent keep writing
34Bittersweetwritingwhoa, chilling! :) great poem it gave me shivers! excellent keep writing