for Shining In Your Eyes8/27/2010 c12 
7smurf-love
im so happy that you started writing again lol...its a very good story and i enjoy it so much so ya im happy, cant wait till the next chapter comes out
7smurf-loveim so happy that you started writing again lol...its a very good story and i enjoy it so much so ya im happy, cant wait till the next chapter comes out
1/1/2010 c13 4I am Switzerland 101
heya just started reading this today all day lol couldn't get enough(: but i noticed its been like over a year now since the update :( Please update soon i hate to see such an awesome story lead off like this right when everything amazing started happening. so update when ya can, your readers would greatly appreciate it :)
-NEM
4I am Switzerland 101heya just started reading this today all day lol couldn't get enough(: but i noticed its been like over a year now since the update :( Please update soon i hate to see such an awesome story lead off like this right when everything amazing started happening. so update when ya can, your readers would greatly appreciate it :)
-NEM
9/5/2009 c13 7smurf-love
i like it alot, i really do think you should keep writing this story...
good luck...
~smurf~
7smurf-lovei like it alot, i really do think you should keep writing this story...
good luck...
~smurf~
6/2/2008 c12 Kagamin
OMGOMGOMG . D:
I just stumbled to this site and this is the first fan fic I read here! OMFG I SO LOVE IT!
x) Please update soon and congrats on your graduation~.
OMGOMGOMG . D:
I just stumbled to this site and this is the first fan fic I read here! OMFG I SO LOVE IT!
x) Please update soon and congrats on your graduation~.
11/14/2007 c12 chloe
heya plz update soon! im loving the story so much and i reli wanna c how kai would react to knwing layra gettin rapped! they are such a cute pair! i wish they would have stayed longer then that!
heya plz update soon! im loving the story so much and i reli wanna c how kai would react to knwing layra gettin rapped! they are such a cute pair! i wish they would have stayed longer then that!
6/13/2007 c12 1UniquelyNeverSeen
wow i loved it your really an astounding writer, can't wait for you to continue!
1UniquelyNeverSeenwow i loved it your really an astounding writer, can't wait for you to continue!
6/12/2007 c3 cherriibomb
i think your story is great so far but i think your cpaters are short and need more details. thatll captures readers attention more. but nonetheless i like your story
i think your story is great so far but i think your cpaters are short and need more details. thatll captures readers attention more. but nonetheless i like your story
6/12/2007 c12 2Dreamer in the Moonlight
Ah! Yes, that was definitely a good chapter! ^_^ I can't wait till the next chapter! Ah, so you just graduated? Me too! I graduated high school about two weeks ago, haha, but I don't really have all that much more time to update my stories on ficitonpress and cause I'm working a whole bunch... but yeah, so, anyways congrats on graduating! And I'll be looking forward to updates on this story! Just thought I'd drop a review. XP
2Dreamer in the MoonlightAh! Yes, that was definitely a good chapter! ^_^ I can't wait till the next chapter! Ah, so you just graduated? Me too! I graduated high school about two weeks ago, haha, but I don't really have all that much more time to update my stories on ficitonpress and cause I'm working a whole bunch... but yeah, so, anyways congrats on graduating! And I'll be looking forward to updates on this story! Just thought I'd drop a review. XP
3/15/2007 c11 4soccerbabe16
hey, this is a great story, i hope there is more romance to come. No criticism, just please update soon :)
4soccerbabe16hey, this is a great story, i hope there is more romance to come. No criticism, just please update soon :)
9/7/2006 c9 frizzy
An interesting fic. You're developing her character slowly, and there are some aspects which need exploring more thoroughly, so update soon.
An interesting fic. You're developing her character slowly, and there are some aspects which need exploring more thoroughly, so update soon.
1/8/2006 c9 2Hug a Tree
LOVE the story! update soon! i REALLy wanna find out what happens next. can't wait!
2Hug a TreeLOVE the story! update soon! i REALLy wanna find out what happens next. can't wait!