for Hemorrhage3/30/2007 c1 D
i don't think insipid is the right word here, to be honest
i don't think insipid is the right word here, to be honest
10/6/2005 c1 
40R. Blade
this rocked! but of course, i tend to favor this type of poetry and writing. it's even better when you have a real picture to attatch to the words! :coughforgetisaidthatcough: ... um... yeah
~scars~
40R. Bladethis rocked! but of course, i tend to favor this type of poetry and writing. it's even better when you have a real picture to attatch to the words! :coughforgetisaidthatcough: ... um... yeah
~scars~
9/18/2005 c1 32Darlingdeath
Amazing... quite emotions... i've been there.. well, almost... great work... favourite for sure
32DarlingdeathAmazing... quite emotions... i've been there.. well, almost... great work... favourite for sure
9/13/2005 c1 20dont want to know
i love the allusion you have created in this poem. the fact that its only short adds too. well done
20dont want to knowi love the allusion you have created in this poem. the fact that its only short adds too. well done
7/17/2005 c1 blah
good again...
good again...
6/21/2005 c1 10Professor Smith
This is very, very good...your words are very powerful. I'm honored to have you as my first reviewer for my story...*bows* I'm not worthy!
10Professor SmithThis is very, very good...your words are very powerful. I'm honored to have you as my first reviewer for my story...*bows* I'm not worthy!
6/16/2005 c1 7Syns
Blunt and satisfying.
I'm still impressed.
Post more soon, you're truly my favorite Author on fp.
7SynsBlunt and satisfying.
I'm still impressed.
Post more soon, you're truly my favorite Author on fp.
6/16/2005 c1 141AllyCred
this is good...kinda like my poem "Steps To Suicide"...amazingly well written...ur words are very powerful...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~
141AllyCredthis is good...kinda like my poem "Steps To Suicide"...amazingly well written...ur words are very powerful...well done. lots of love ~AllyCred~
6/2/2005 c1 annonymos
this is good detail n all. but where;s the story? I understand this is great but this could just as well be a poem. If you want to write like this make it a unryming poem. That would've been a good start for a story. But thats just it. there is no story. I do hope u keep writing cuz this isinteresting...
this is good detail n all. but where;s the story? I understand this is great but this could just as well be a poem. If you want to write like this make it a unryming poem. That would've been a good start for a story. But thats just it. there is no story. I do hope u keep writing cuz this isinteresting...
5/29/2005 c1 2Terrence L
Some very good imageries and sophisticated language used there, shame it's too short, make it longer next time!
2Terrence LSome very good imageries and sophisticated language used there, shame it's too short, make it longer next time!
5/29/2005 c1 87youzi
i've read toomany wrist-cutter pieces...like nearly 20 or more! this is one of the most vivid i've come across. good use of imagery. keep writing =D
87youzii've read toomany wrist-cutter pieces...like nearly 20 or more! this is one of the most vivid i've come across. good use of imagery. keep writing =D
5/28/2005 c1 3DebonairDeppDame
i have just read all of your poetry. i am undone...in other words, it's really good. Your raw emotion is completely overwhelming and each poem paints a different picture in my mind. I would also like to thank you for writing the first review for my story...
3DebonairDeppDamei have just read all of your poetry. i am undone...in other words, it's really good. Your raw emotion is completely overwhelming and each poem paints a different picture in my mind. I would also like to thank you for writing the first review for my story...