
2/24/2019 c1 Rupert Rotwang
This short piece is excellently well written. It hits all the right buttons,from her earliest experience to be transformation to an empty shell. Very well done. There's not a wasted word, this is beautiful, skilled writing.
This short piece is excellently well written. It hits all the right buttons,from her earliest experience to be transformation to an empty shell. Very well done. There's not a wasted word, this is beautiful, skilled writing.
4/21/2018 c1 Hilarious
Hahahahahaha this would be a great joke but unfortunately it seems to be a real thing. I guess this story is what happens when horny 13-year old virgins start to write fanfiction. XD
I'm sorry I cant stop laughing. XD This is so stupid...
Hahahahahaha this would be a great joke but unfortunately it seems to be a real thing. I guess this story is what happens when horny 13-year old virgins start to write fanfiction. XD
I'm sorry I cant stop laughing. XD This is so stupid...
4/7/2018 c3 Lol
This is shit
This is shit
3/4/2018 c2 chris
what the hell is the is?
what the hell is the is?
1/21/2018 c5 Guest
Yes!,
More!
What if she has to rape a child, instead of kill him?
Yes!,
More!
What if she has to rape a child, instead of kill him?
8/11/2017 c1 Ashley Greene
ME NO LIKE UR STORY!
ME NO LIKE UR STORY!
4/17/2017 c5 Savage
You're mentally disturbed.
You're mentally disturbed.
3/11/2017 c6 Abel
The man is really a monster
The man is really a monster
6/22/2015 c6 stella
fun happy!
fun happy!
7/16/2014 c6 Guest
Dam
The feels. I love it
Dam
The feels. I love it
5/9/2014 c1 Guest
Oh my god! She has my name, spelled my way! I LOVE it!
Oh my god! She has my name, spelled my way! I LOVE it!
10/2/2013 c6 janelle
I love it, and can not wait to hear the rest! Keep up the great writing.
I love it, and can not wait to hear the rest! Keep up the great writing.
2/17/2013 c6 Eclipse
Epic! Now I have to find all the others :)
Epic! Now I have to find all the others :)
12/3/2012 c6 Guest
woh! wat an intrestng and scary cronicle! I like it!
woh! wat an intrestng and scary cronicle! I like it!