for Tear Myself Down6/4/2005 c1 
33Twigstudios1972
Written honestly and straight from the heart. I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this because I was there not too long ago. Thanks for writing this and sharing it. Love you. Twig COG
33Twigstudios1972Written honestly and straight from the heart. I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this because I was there not too long ago. Thanks for writing this and sharing it. Love you. Twig COG
5/30/2005 c1 2leadam
That was awesome. I so can relate to that at times. BTW, You have such a wonderful gift of writing.I enjoy reading many of your other poems too.Keep writing, it something so easy to relate to. Good job!
2leadamThat was awesome. I so can relate to that at times. BTW, You have such a wonderful gift of writing.I enjoy reading many of your other poems too.Keep writing, it something so easy to relate to. Good job!
5/29/2005 c1 21WannaBWriter
you write many things that i can relate to, this being one of them. as i was reading i applied it to my own life, and how i often feel, like i am lost in a hole without air and no one to help. great write!
21WannaBWriteryou write many things that i can relate to, this being one of them. as i was reading i applied it to my own life, and how i often feel, like i am lost in a hole without air and no one to help. great write!
5/27/2005 c1 1Dasha Jadyn
it's very powerful and creates extremely vivid pictures. great use of repetition.
1Dasha Jadynit's very powerful and creates extremely vivid pictures. great use of repetition.