
7/13/2006 c1 A Lone Howl
Beautiful. I loved it.
Beautiful. I loved it.
9/30/2005 c1
7AethraZip
If I didn't consistently tell you already, I would say that this poem is fucking amazing and so are you. But I tell you that every time you write a poem and you haven't believed yet, so I won't say so now.
Anyway, the repetition.. or whatever Krusty calls it.. that thingie where lines repeat but change some words, remember? is really effective. Makes the poem, I think. Nice job.

If I didn't consistently tell you already, I would say that this poem is fucking amazing and so are you. But I tell you that every time you write a poem and you haven't believed yet, so I won't say so now.
Anyway, the repetition.. or whatever Krusty calls it.. that thingie where lines repeat but change some words, remember? is really effective. Makes the poem, I think. Nice job.