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8/2/2005 c1 104FunkyFlower
a very unique and original poem. love the way u give a stanza for each colour. great combination. awesome imagery and some lovely lines. beautiful altogether, well done:-)
7/27/2005 c1 103Unready
hooray diversity, and by diversity, I mean crayons that are different colors!
7/2/2005 c1 63lackluster
b e a u t i f u l!
6/30/2005 c1 65Aquafied
wow, this poem is really beautiful.

i love the idea of colors from crayons, that draw the world, that is genius, really.

i have had heard purple is royalty many times, interesting.

its just awesome.
6/2/2005 c1 14In Search of Sunrise
wow...u do describe the colors well. very well written hahah...i liked ur choice of words...good job!^^

~DW

ps. thx for the review and the fav poem! =P
5/30/2005 c1 24Moonjava
Oh, I like this! It made me smile. Very charming. I especially like how at the end of the poem, you connected all the colors together. This is a nice chance with all the angst poems I see on this site. Not that I mind but this was refreshing.
5/27/2005 c1 Alya
AWSOME! =3 COLORS! I am reminded of a song by Crossfade now x_x;;

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