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10/7/2006 c1 nasyita
NICE! VERY NICE! LOVE IT! BYE
11/21/2005 c1 Sakura Reyna
This is a shortened version of All Quiet On the Western Front. It is what this poem reinds me of, which is a good thing.
5/29/2005 c1 2Terrence L
Very down to earth, simple and casual. The consecutive lines usnig continuing verbe tense in the middle section of the poem is quite effective.

However it needs a deeper phychological insight of the soldier, just describing the visuals is too plain.

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