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5/28/2005 c1 199Saeger
That's cute. The second line of every stanza being just 'Let go' really broke it up, kept the reasder almost focused, but at the same time, had to be loose to the meaning implied afterwards... It was a neat scheme, and a sweet intention. Nice job.
5/28/2005 c1 119Whisper on the Lips
Oh, i like the rhyme scheme! it is a sweet poem, WRITE ON! (=

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