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6/23/2005 c1 32eldrin
This is wonderful, especially the last five lines, which seem to really speak, though the entire poem forms a very beautiful image.
5/29/2005 c1 6Interim Of Zeal
I really wish I could say something aside from great job, for just one of these. I wish I could critique these... but they're far above my level, and I don't know if there is anything you could possibly do to make them better... Excellent job.
5/29/2005 c1 36Amrun
The imagery was nice, but it could have been more ... concise. It's like seperate little bits of thought that stemmed from a common subject. The poem would be much better if you could find some way to connect them. Still, you paint a powerful depiction of a thunderstorm.
5/29/2005 c1 22dragonsdream13
i really like this, it seems simple at first glance but seems to have an underlying complexity to it that i really like. i also like the great imagry for the storm that you used. overall, this is a great nature poem.

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