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7/11/2005 c1 C. K. Holmes
Oh, that's so sad! It's a rare poem that makes me want to cry, but this one had me in tears.

This poem is short, to the point, with no fluff, sleek and sophisticated. All in all, a very well-written and effective piece.
6/4/2005 c1 84peaceman4ever
wow...very emotional...i know how that can feel...
6/3/2005 c1 30Drizit
Wouldn't we all want to undo everything bad we do. But its what makes us humans. Its what gives us passion and blah3 and what not. Sorry, not in the mood for words. Very bad cold. I think its the Flu season...
6/1/2005 c1 3Crazy Biene
wow...this is sad and nice.
5/29/2005 c1 19ShadowNemesis
This gave me chills... I love the repeated phrase "I wish...", and I like how each one of the two-line statements were different, and yet they flowed so well. Good job.

-ShadowNemesis
5/29/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
wow... sad and well written
5/29/2005 c1 80citrus scented
this is awesome, god it captures so much raw and honest heartfelt emotion it really bottles up a touching little piece. just incredible.

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