for But You Were The One8/5/2005 c1 
11les petits bateaux
It has great situation to lots of people, including me. Beautiful and deep. :)
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxIt has great situation to lots of people, including me. Beautiful and deep. :)
~~Trinity
6/17/2005 c1 9Mars Demo
this is good poem, it has a deeper meaning and i like that, the structure is a little bit weak but since you were in 9th grade when you wrote this that is understandable. All in all it is a really good poem
mars
9Mars Demothis is good poem, it has a deeper meaning and i like that, the structure is a little bit weak but since you were in 9th grade when you wrote this that is understandable. All in all it is a really good poem
mars
6/1/2005 c1 Darisha
This is really nicely written. It says so much, but at the same time leaves you guessing. I like the repetition of the title in the poem - distinguishes the pattern and adds emphasis to the words.
This is really nicely written. It says so much, but at the same time leaves you guessing. I like the repetition of the title in the poem - distinguishes the pattern and adds emphasis to the words.