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6/23/2005 c1 190Miz E. Mak
I like it, but for some reason the "endless dark" thing just rubbed me the wrong way. I would change it to "endless night" just because night emplies so much more than just dark and it feels/sounds better. But thats me.

Great work. Keep writing.
6/2/2005 c1 216ygg
Strong but depressive.. Great work!
5/31/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
powerful & creepy.. nice
5/31/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
5/30/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
very inspiring. dark and a bit frightening when given a bit more thought, taking it literally as in some one being made into a slave and other such ways you could put it. either way this is still amazing and beautifully written. though not really your best, I still see it as a well written and suspenseful read. nearly perfect but a bit vague, not very detailed but it is still great. I find little fault in it. ^_^ beautifully done!

!~* noelle *~!
5/30/2005 c1 8Slowly Sinking
Hmm... not sure about the form - feels too brief to really capture the idea - but still good, I guess maybe the form enhances the 'trapped' idea... Very emotive poem either way, keep it up.

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