for Hide1/6/2006 c1 
11les petits bateaux
Intimidating and quite horrific, until some extent that it made me shiver a bit. Good job with the descriptions.
11les petits bateauxIntimidating and quite horrific, until some extent that it made me shiver a bit. Good job with the descriptions.
1/2/2006 c1 28Hate In The Form Of Passion
This is really something that I think lots of people can relate to. That they have experience or, god forbid, are experiencing.
In a couple of lines you send people a message that I would only be able to make if I wrote like 300+ words. You're very talented and you have a unique gift.
28Hate In The Form Of PassionThis is really something that I think lots of people can relate to. That they have experience or, god forbid, are experiencing.
In a couple of lines you send people a message that I would only be able to make if I wrote like 300+ words. You're very talented and you have a unique gift.
11/7/2005 c1 30jez two
You have a way of writing that's easily excessable to a lot of people, it's a real gift.
I know I've said this before but you have real talent, have you submitted anything to a publisher?
30jez twoYou have a way of writing that's easily excessable to a lot of people, it's a real gift.
I know I've said this before but you have real talent, have you submitted anything to a publisher?
9/23/2005 c1 39SliversofSilverPain
this is so cool. well written, almost shaking, the style. it adds to it rather than taking away; well done. flawless
39SliversofSilverPainthis is so cool. well written, almost shaking, the style. it adds to it rather than taking away; well done. flawless
8/30/2005 c1 89Armas Apple
^_^I'm having a hard time understanding the poem... but I'm sure I'll get it later, when I'm not reading it.Your poem is very deep. My brain is shallow... ^_^ I like the choppy format, it seems to make suspence.And thanks for reviewing my poem! ^_^~Armas Apple
89Armas Apple^_^I'm having a hard time understanding the poem... but I'm sure I'll get it later, when I'm not reading it.Your poem is very deep. My brain is shallow... ^_^ I like the choppy format, it seems to make suspence.And thanks for reviewing my poem! ^_^~Armas Apple
8/26/2005 c1 65dancingintherain
short lines gave this piece an edge to it-very well written- pain and emotion just seeps through eacb word...love the last two lines-
nice job overall! and thank you for reviewing me =P
~dancingintherain~
65dancingintherainshort lines gave this piece an edge to it-very well written- pain and emotion just seeps through eacb word...love the last two lines-
nice job overall! and thank you for reviewing me =P
~dancingintherain~
8/18/2005 c1 38CarpeDiem28
you expressed it very well. I like it. It's short, but powerful and emotional.
Keep up th work.
38CarpeDiem28you expressed it very well. I like it. It's short, but powerful and emotional.
Keep up th work.
8/14/2005 c1 12FlawedSerenity
You're an awesome writer, obviously, keep it up! Thanks for the review you gave me, too, it means a lot. :) Can't wait to read more of your work.
Thanks again, ~ Me
12FlawedSerenityYou're an awesome writer, obviously, keep it up! Thanks for the review you gave me, too, it means a lot. :) Can't wait to read more of your work.
Thanks again, ~ Me
8/8/2005 c1 24Moonjava
This is just so sad. I dislike parents who do this kind of stuff to their kids.
24MoonjavaThis is just so sad. I dislike parents who do this kind of stuff to their kids.
8/7/2005 c1 binderem
Wow, very powerful. I read the summary beforehand and it really sets the stage for the poem. You have a very strong style of writing, and I love it. It was portrayed so well, how this girl is so disturbed by her parents. Very well done.
Wow, very powerful. I read the summary beforehand and it really sets the stage for the poem. You have a very strong style of writing, and I love it. It was portrayed so well, how this girl is so disturbed by her parents. Very well done.
8/2/2005 c1 How About Nope
This is pretty sad, but very very well written...You know what? This is related to "Just Another Letter", too...though not as much as "Moon and Stars" is.
This is pretty sad, but very very well written...You know what? This is related to "Just Another Letter", too...though not as much as "Moon and Stars" is.
7/27/2005 c1 70Burning Moon
btw, if you have an email address, email me. since i dunno what yours is, thanks for the review you left of "the fire"; i'm glad you liked it.
70Burning Moonbtw, if you have an email address, email me. since i dunno what yours is, thanks for the review you left of "the fire"; i'm glad you liked it.