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6/3/2005 c1 169Crimson Riley
But to hide is to not be yourself, and which is the greater evil in the end?
6/3/2005 c1 33Quebrada Angel
I know that feeling and all that hate so much, this was really well written.
6/3/2005 c1 24katmonkey
Aww, that's so sad. Very well written!

*lime-girl*
6/3/2005 c1 38whatasecret
Sad...and well written! Good Job!
6/2/2005 c1 20whitewave1191
Very powerful. I especially like the style in which it flows. Well written.
6/2/2005 c1 myno
i've felt that way before... good poem.
6/1/2005 c1 21Aella88
I like the way you set this poem up. Simple short lines, but the single words still really convey your message. Also, I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poem Crimson Tears. I don't think I remembered to say that actually, the Crimson tears that the heart is crying represents blood. Just thought I'd clear thatup. Anyway, Your poem reminds me of a story, only I can't remember what it was called. The poem is kind of sad. It mainly consists of hurtful words, but that was the whole emotion being shown here. Good work.
6/1/2005 c1 64EmbersAblaze-IgnitedIcicle
Damn.
6/1/2005 c1 33PunkishGirl
Thank you for reviewing my poem. This, I can somewhat relate to. I love the way this is set up. Beautiful.
5/31/2005 c1 2Words-in-the-Wind
I feel for this character. I really do. Thank you.
5/31/2005 c1 36Amrun
Nice. The feelings of filth were cleanly expressed.
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