for Hospital Vignette5/31/2005 c1 itsonlyreality
honey you just get better and better. im in love with your imagery and i love how it puts you in the place of the person whos experiencing it. you used a couple of cliches that hurt to read (the big man in the white coat said i could go) but haha like all the other times i ever write reviews, im being overly picky. it just pissed me off. but other than that the story is beautiful i love it so much
honey you just get better and better. im in love with your imagery and i love how it puts you in the place of the person whos experiencing it. you used a couple of cliches that hurt to read (the big man in the white coat said i could go) but haha like all the other times i ever write reviews, im being overly picky. it just pissed me off. but other than that the story is beautiful i love it so much
5/31/2005 c1 
102Midnight In Eden
I like this for it's feeling of truth. I like the way it's confusing to the reader but you can still understand the scenario and emotions behind it all.
welcome back.
.:midnight:.
102Midnight In EdenI like this for it's feeling of truth. I like the way it's confusing to the reader but you can still understand the scenario and emotions behind it all.
welcome back.
.:midnight:.