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10/21/2005 c1 blarghshima
Horrible. Just horrible.

Bad...very bad.

In so many ways.

Even the "non-rhyme" scheme is bad.


Stop writing and save us all from torture.
6/30/2005 c1 11Locomotive Breath
Not bad overall, but it could use some work. I thought it was quite pretty but the last line's length threw off the meter and flow of the poem. Also, the old English sounds kind of random.
6/2/2005 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Powerful and passionate, I loved it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.

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