for My Perfect Distraction6/27/2005 c1 
124in theory
The second stanza of this piece of art..is astonishing. Very very striking. Probably just me, but it kinda speaks directly to me. Beautiful ending too.
124in theoryThe second stanza of this piece of art..is astonishing. Very very striking. Probably just me, but it kinda speaks directly to me. Beautiful ending too.
6/14/2005 c1 10Tia1
Very true! I think it is those feelings that scare everyone so badly about ever feeling love! You capture both emotion wonderfully
10Tia1Very true! I think it is those feelings that scare everyone so badly about ever feeling love! You capture both emotion wonderfully
6/4/2005 c1 49Temptd
omg i'm in Love with this poem...this i can so relate to..Love it..great work...
49Temptdomg i'm in Love with this poem...this i can so relate to..Love it..great work...
6/3/2005 c1 81Princess-anna57
Hi! Great poem! Very well written! Cool! ^_^
Write on; you have talent!
Thank you very much for reviewing me, by the way!
~Anna~
81Princess-anna57Hi! Great poem! Very well written! Cool! ^_^
Write on; you have talent!
Thank you very much for reviewing me, by the way!
~Anna~
6/3/2005 c1 Bronwen Ackeley
wonderful job! I liked this one a lot! you really captured the feeling in it, and grwat word choice!:) You're really good at that!
wonderful job! I liked this one a lot! you really captured the feeling in it, and grwat word choice!:) You're really good at that!
6/3/2005 c1 50your guilty pleasure
wow. I like it alot. It's got the real dependancy of first love within its words. It's a great poem.
50your guilty pleasurewow. I like it alot. It's got the real dependancy of first love within its words. It's a great poem.
6/3/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Ouch...what a sad poem.Desires are really hard to forget,ain't it?Great poem,by the way.:)
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxOuch...what a sad poem.Desires are really hard to forget,ain't it?Great poem,by the way.:)
~~Trinity
6/2/2005 c1 229TheBrokenWanderer
Beautiful...there is no piece of work on this site that could capture my feelings right now...i know exactly what this feels like...to my favorites it(and u) shall go...much love...
~The Broken Wanderer~
229TheBrokenWandererBeautiful...there is no piece of work on this site that could capture my feelings right now...i know exactly what this feels like...to my favorites it(and u) shall go...much love...
~The Broken Wanderer~