for The Heart Monitor8/31/2006 c1 
5SummerWind88
This is the way one-shots should be written. Briefly explain what's goin on but still there's that small air of mystery to it. Cool
5SummerWind88This is the way one-shots should be written. Briefly explain what's goin on but still there's that small air of mystery to it. Cool
2/13/2006 c1 2callmebelle
wow... this was different, and i really liked it. was it meant to be anorexia that the girl had? it was probably obvious, and i just didn't get it... anyway, i love the short sentences that follow the long ones. great style.
2callmebellewow... this was different, and i really liked it. was it meant to be anorexia that the girl had? it was probably obvious, and i just didn't get it... anyway, i love the short sentences that follow the long ones. great style.
2/11/2006 c1 7Someday-I-will-Understand
That was interesting... diffrent.. but good, it makes me want to know why she is that way, you should continue it. it would make a great story =) O check out my story LNETHU if you get a chance, I'd like to know what you think since you review lots of storys on here.
-somedayIwillunderstand
7Someday-I-will-UnderstandThat was interesting... diffrent.. but good, it makes me want to know why she is that way, you should continue it. it would make a great story =) O check out my story LNETHU if you get a chance, I'd like to know what you think since you review lots of storys on here.
-somedayIwillunderstand
12/25/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
This was very interesting and unique. I like the whole content about how she isn't actually human. Very good.
~~Trinity
11les petits bateauxThis was very interesting and unique. I like the whole content about how she isn't actually human. Very good.
~~Trinity
11/30/2005 c1 hey maria
Firstly, thank you for all your nice reviews - they made me feel so warm and happy.
I've never read anything like this before. It's so matter-or-fact, but still very, very sad. It's just a little snapshot of a moment but still so powerful. Great job.
Firstly, thank you for all your nice reviews - they made me feel so warm and happy.
I've never read anything like this before. It's so matter-or-fact, but still very, very sad. It's just a little snapshot of a moment but still so powerful. Great job.
11/19/2005 c1 32Stormy Daye
This is kind of depressing, I'm not saying that in a bad way though. I just mean the mood through the entire thing is consistent and it's matter of fact. It's not trying to be really memorable or anything, but sometimes that is what makes you really remember it.I read a review you did of someone else's story and it was really good, the criticism I mean. I would love it if you could read and review something (or more than one something) of mine. I think it would help a lot!
32Stormy DayeThis is kind of depressing, I'm not saying that in a bad way though. I just mean the mood through the entire thing is consistent and it's matter of fact. It's not trying to be really memorable or anything, but sometimes that is what makes you really remember it.I read a review you did of someone else's story and it was really good, the criticism I mean. I would love it if you could read and review something (or more than one something) of mine. I think it would help a lot!
7/13/2005 c1 10Bookgirl2021
...*blank stare*... This is really interesting. What I wonder is why she's the way she is. Why does she say her heart's not working right? Why...why...why?
10Bookgirl2021...*blank stare*... This is really interesting. What I wonder is why she's the way she is. Why does she say her heart's not working right? Why...why...why?
7/10/2005 c1 3NoFx-JuSt-Me
Great work, you have a great way with details! Keep up the great work!
Thanks for reviewing my story!After all the reviews I have been getting, I guess I'm going to keep going. And cream-colored things are my thing, I guess! LoL. Thanks Again!
3NoFx-JuSt-MeGreat work, you have a great way with details! Keep up the great work!
Thanks for reviewing my story!After all the reviews I have been getting, I guess I'm going to keep going. And cream-colored things are my thing, I guess! LoL. Thanks Again!