
9/27/2014 c17 Guest
YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS SHIT!
YOU BETTER UPDATE THIS SHIT!
1/1/2006 c15 Lonel Emming
One of your best.
Edit!
Please make sure that your voice and Marcus's voice are not confused, but the ambiguity in the beginning is fine.
One of your best.
Edit!
Please make sure that your voice and Marcus's voice are not confused, but the ambiguity in the beginning is fine.
12/27/2005 c13 GoodBye Everybody
Dude, Marcus must be so confused and angry for the fact that he's...well, YOU KNOW...ugh...WHY JOHN!
Dude, Marcus must be so confused and angry for the fact that he's...well, YOU KNOW...ugh...WHY JOHN!
12/6/2005 c12 GoodBye Everybody
@_@ WHAT THE HELL! *STRANGLES YOU* AH! MARCUS...JE..GHWIUG! WHAT THE HELL!
@_@ WHAT THE HELL! *STRANGLES YOU* AH! MARCUS...JE..GHWIUG! WHAT THE HELL!
12/6/2005 c11 GoodBye Everybody
Wow O_o This chapter was kinda freaky yet cool at the same time! Poor, poor Marcus...
*The Mighty Sisto*
Wow O_o This chapter was kinda freaky yet cool at the same time! Poor, poor Marcus...
*The Mighty Sisto*
9/13/2005 c4 Goat Cheese
This sucks. Your chapter makes little sense and it seems you just picked random literate words from your thesraus as if you're desperatly trying to impress the reader for using vocabulary words I would guess the majority of readers never knew existed. Your characters seem out of place when they interact with one another. There is something "missing" in the chemistry. I cannot bare to read any further. I've abused my sockets and wasted enough precious time of my life writing this review. May you keep it close to yourself.
This sucks. Your chapter makes little sense and it seems you just picked random literate words from your thesraus as if you're desperatly trying to impress the reader for using vocabulary words I would guess the majority of readers never knew existed. Your characters seem out of place when they interact with one another. There is something "missing" in the chemistry. I cannot bare to read any further. I've abused my sockets and wasted enough precious time of my life writing this review. May you keep it close to yourself.
8/18/2005 c10 GoodBye Everybody
Ooh Marcus is hiding something...this fire keeps haunting him for some reason...I'm curious to know how he could connect himself ot it.
*The Mighty Sisto*
Ooh Marcus is hiding something...this fire keeps haunting him for some reason...I'm curious to know how he could connect himself ot it.
*The Mighty Sisto*
8/18/2005 c9 GoodBye Everybody
Marcus should have killed that bastard...but now I'm pretty much confused...was it Marcus who burned down Rome, or what? o.O
*The Mighty Sisto*
Marcus should have killed that bastard...but now I'm pretty much confused...was it Marcus who burned down Rome, or what? o.O
*The Mighty Sisto*
8/14/2005 c8 GoodBye Everybody
Good chapter, good chapter, good chapter. Woodeladdy!
*The Mighty Sisto*
Good chapter, good chapter, good chapter. Woodeladdy!
*The Mighty Sisto*
8/7/2005 c7 Lonel Emming
I'm sorry, but this is not the best. "Are you looking for a fight?" More like, "Are you asking for a challenge!"Please make the earlier dialogue easier to follow.
I'm sorry, but this is not the best. "Are you looking for a fight?" More like, "Are you asking for a challenge!"Please make the earlier dialogue easier to follow.
7/24/2005 c8 Kurai Seijin
AGH! Forgive me all, I've been without internet access for almost two weeks while I had two chapters done and couldn't submit! Oh well they are both submitted now. The chapter ten is pretty much done as well so once I'm done revising and editing you should be able to read that too.
The song in question is actually a David Bowie song, "Rebel Rebel." ^^; It's translated into Greek and then French so it sounds like ancient Gaul or Portugese. The character singing the song was inspired from Wes Anderson's "The Life Aquatic."*PAX E EROS!*
AGH! Forgive me all, I've been without internet access for almost two weeks while I had two chapters done and couldn't submit! Oh well they are both submitted now. The chapter ten is pretty much done as well so once I'm done revising and editing you should be able to read that too.
The song in question is actually a David Bowie song, "Rebel Rebel." ^^; It's translated into Greek and then French so it sounds like ancient Gaul or Portugese. The character singing the song was inspired from Wes Anderson's "The Life Aquatic."*PAX E EROS!*
7/15/2005 c7 GoodBye Everybody
E this was actually very cuteness! ^_^ I'm curious to know if Andreas and Marcus will ever become allies to fight Dracon since they loathe eachother so much. I can't wait to read further!
Oh yeah...I finally started writing a LOTR fic...here's the link: http:/w.fanfiction.net/~themightysistoCheck it out, if you want to...I'd appreciate it! ^^
*The Mighty Sisto*
THE HOBBIT COMES OUT TO THEATRES IN 2006! WOOT!
E this was actually very cuteness! ^_^ I'm curious to know if Andreas and Marcus will ever become allies to fight Dracon since they loathe eachother so much. I can't wait to read further!
Oh yeah...I finally started writing a LOTR fic...here's the link: http:/w.fanfiction.net/~themightysistoCheck it out, if you want to...I'd appreciate it! ^^
*The Mighty Sisto*
THE HOBBIT COMES OUT TO THEATRES IN 2006! WOOT!
7/15/2005 c6 GoodBye Everybody
HOLY SHIT. This was AWESOME. Such DETAIL! Such FIGHTING! Best of all, Andreas had his ass kicked! YES!
*The Mighty Sisto*
HOLY SHIT. This was AWESOME. Such DETAIL! Such FIGHTING! Best of all, Andreas had his ass kicked! YES!
*The Mighty Sisto*
7/15/2005 c5 GoodBye Everybody
I think you're the next Tolkien. Did you write that song yourself? I love this chapter, but I still hate Andres with a passion. Thank God Marcus will help Katarine out, it seemed like nobody else would hear her out! Off to the next chapter!
*The Mighty Sisto*
I think you're the next Tolkien. Did you write that song yourself? I love this chapter, but I still hate Andres with a passion. Thank God Marcus will help Katarine out, it seemed like nobody else would hear her out! Off to the next chapter!
*The Mighty Sisto*