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38Muted Prose
It's kind of like... Believing in yourself and knowing your abilities and strengths when others who don't know you only see what's on the outside. While you see a rainbow in yourself (which is good ^_^), others see the plain old black and white. The greatest poems always come up when you least expect it ('specially 3 o' clock in the morning or when you're half-asleep). Great job! `~MP
38Muted ProseIt's kind of like... Believing in yourself and knowing your abilities and strengths when others who don't know you only see what's on the outside. While you see a rainbow in yourself (which is good ^_^), others see the plain old black and white. The greatest poems always come up when you least expect it ('specially 3 o' clock in the morning or when you're half-asleep). Great job! `~MP
6/4/2005 c1 234The Moribund Marionette
It actually is quite good, contrary to your mind's most holy and popular opinion. Don't put yourself down like that, even if it is jokingly. :) Live and in color, ~Writer of Darkness~
234The Moribund MarionetteIt actually is quite good, contrary to your mind's most holy and popular opinion. Don't put yourself down like that, even if it is jokingly. :) Live and in color, ~Writer of Darkness~
6/4/2005 c1 9Eyes of Amethyst
Short yet sweet. There's a deeper meaning despite the shortness of the poem. Keep writing! =)
ps: I'm impressed you made a poem with lack of sleep. I did that once, but I lost the poem. ^^ But maybe being half-asleep while writing a poem is a good thing... You see things in a different light, and you imagine things you'd never think of when fully awake. But that's just me. ^^ Sorry for this boring lecture. =)
~Eyes of Amethyst
9Eyes of AmethystShort yet sweet. There's a deeper meaning despite the shortness of the poem. Keep writing! =)
ps: I'm impressed you made a poem with lack of sleep. I did that once, but I lost the poem. ^^ But maybe being half-asleep while writing a poem is a good thing... You see things in a different light, and you imagine things you'd never think of when fully awake. But that's just me. ^^ Sorry for this boring lecture. =)
~Eyes of Amethyst
6/4/2005 c1 8Unknown Unnamed
I like the choppiness. It gives it a really dramatic feeling. Sweetness.
8Unknown UnnamedI like the choppiness. It gives it a really dramatic feeling. Sweetness.