for Misunderstood6/16/2010 c1 
3Mary Freda
Are you planning on revisiting this? I'd be really interested in seeing where it goes.
3Mary FredaAre you planning on revisiting this? I'd be really interested in seeing where it goes.
10/30/2005 c1 Sweet Dreamer Hana Yume
This story is fantastic! I can actually visual myself seeing the character and feel the way the character, Sarah, does. I can imagine everything single detail in my mind.
I must say, you write extremely well for a fourteen-year-old. Keep up the good work, and hope you write another chapter.
~Lady Akina
This story is fantastic! I can actually visual myself seeing the character and feel the way the character, Sarah, does. I can imagine everything single detail in my mind.
I must say, you write extremely well for a fourteen-year-old. Keep up the good work, and hope you write another chapter.
~Lady Akina
6/24/2005 c1 28Accalia Aeryn
Excellent story! I think you're doing a wonderful job writing this! I'd love to see another chapter. :)
28Accalia AerynExcellent story! I think you're doing a wonderful job writing this! I'd love to see another chapter. :)
6/18/2005 c1 pianogal
oh my gosh, you have a very good ability to write. i can't believe you are only 14. i love the way you describe things. the way you describe them is so perfect that i can see it all in my brain. i'm really liking Sarah's character especially her interesting relationship with her parents. it reminds me of my relationship with my parents. i really hope you continue with this story because i would be interested in reading it.
oh my gosh, you have a very good ability to write. i can't believe you are only 14. i love the way you describe things. the way you describe them is so perfect that i can see it all in my brain. i'm really liking Sarah's character especially her interesting relationship with her parents. it reminds me of my relationship with my parents. i really hope you continue with this story because i would be interested in reading it.