for Crimson Sea6/28/2005 c1 
40Nev Jee
Hey, thanks for the review.
This was short and sweet and, cmon, who couldn't relate to it at some point or another?
A little cliche, but not in an obnoxious way. You took an old idea and made it refreshing and complete.
40Nev JeeHey, thanks for the review.
This was short and sweet and, cmon, who couldn't relate to it at some point or another?
A little cliche, but not in an obnoxious way. You took an old idea and made it refreshing and complete.
6/6/2005 c1 mistressKC
short yet sweet - good job
short yet sweet - good job
6/5/2005 c1 94smile persephone
This poem, though short, is full of emotion and passion. I love the imagery and the power this holds. Wonderfully done!
94smile persephoneThis poem, though short, is full of emotion and passion. I love the imagery and the power this holds. Wonderfully done!